docs: improve grammar and clarity in online installation guide - #815
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In `@docs/installation/online-installation.md`:
- Line 43: Update the installation success criterion to verify readiness rather
than only the Running phase. In the pod verification instructions, use kubectl
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headings here become title case but the other file in this pr keeps sentence case, and the rest of the docs are sentence case. should both match?
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A separate PR #817 was opened earlier to standardize the headings to Title Case across the documentation.
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Alright, I’ve dropped the three heading renames, so they remain in sentence case.
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/lgtm cancel the lgtm and approved labels predate my review. approved landed on 24 august, lgtm on 27 august, and i left four questions on 2 september. the head is still e5c86d0, so nothing has changed since, and all four threads are open with no reply. prow drops the labels on a new commit but not on new comments, which is why this still looked ready. the two that matter most:
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What type of PR is this?
/kind documentation
What this PR does / why we need it:
Improve the grammar, wording, and clarity of the Online Installation documentation and the Dynamic MIG Support documentation.
Which issue(s) this PR fixes:
Fixes #814
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